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Earthrise - The Story of Earth's Fall by Rayen-V-Storme Earthrise - The Story of Earth's Fall by Rayen-V-Storme

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EDITS: Well, in the time I've spent SINCE this, I have learned a few things. Went back, tried to fix this baby up. Generally, it's still a piece of poo, but hopefully this is the fabreeze that makes it less foul ^.~

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Just my first upload.
Inspiration? I read a few articles not too long ago that discussed what the President would say if an Apollo mission ever failed and the astronauts were stranded on the moon.
It got me to thinking.
Well.
What if....what if the astronauts...in this case, single astronaut, were stranded. But not because of a failed mission.
Take a look.
Critique and review is welcome.

Cheers
~Rayen

EDIT: I changed the main picture for two reasons. First of all, it simply was not all that great of a picture.
Second, This one....this one is simply awesome, and it fits the theme rather well.
It is also more eye catching. Hope you like!

Art Credit: RoadioArts AKA Rod
"Doomed Planet"
www.deviantart.com/art/Doomed-…
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:iconlunarnightmare:
So was it nukes? or did the sun go super nova? what happened?? haha
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Rayen-V-Storme Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I always thought nuclear war >: D
What was the first thing you thought of?
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:iconlunarnightmare:
I thought of Alien Invasion, Super Volcanos, And Nuclear War
But I felt the nuclear war was the best fit.
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ThompsonBlackshire Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
Majestic.
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Rayen-V-Storme Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Not sure how I missed your comment! Thank you very much ^.^
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ImaginaryOctopus Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is deep. I can only imagine the anguish the lone survivor is experiencing. Simply beautiful :)
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Rayen-V-Storme Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much ^^
I cannot even imagine how he would feel so I left it open ended. Just think...being the last person alive in the entire universe....
Not to self advertise, but if you liked this one, I think you *might* enjoy....

It has a similar....hollow feeling to it.
I appreciate the feedback!

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IrelElengar Oct 30, 2013  Student Writer
Simply stunning! Artists paint pictures with brushes and colors, writers paint worlds with words. It is so vivid...and quite interesting...I can imagine everything, the flames, the oceans changing, the souls extinguished! Woaha, you are talented!
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Rayen-V-Storme Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much for the feedback!
That is always my goal when it comes to writing stories. I want the reader to see what I see and feel it too. Hearing this really made my day!
You are too kind :D
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IrelElengar Oct 31, 2013  Student Writer
'Tis only the truth, you very talented person.
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